Sentence Diagramming: Where the Wild Things Are

In these sporadic sentence diagramming posts, I diagram sentences to deepen their meaning, to become a better writer, or for my own amusement. One of the pieces of advice I received when I wrote a book about planets for my son was to match the number of words in a sentence to the age of the … Continue reading Sentence Diagramming: Where the Wild Things Are

Sentence Diagramming: Jane Eyre Part 3

In these sporadic sentence diagramming posts, I diagram sentences to deepen their meaning, to improve my writing, or for my own amusement. The shortest sentences can have the greatest impact. Think of the famous first line from Moby Dick, “Call me Ishmael.” Scholars have written tomes on that sentence. Me, I prefer Jane Eyre.   One of the … Continue reading Sentence Diagramming: Jane Eyre Part 3

Sentence Diagramming: Jane Eyre Part 2

In these sporadic sentence diagramming posts, I diagram sentences to deepen their meaning, to become a better writer, or for my own amusement. Patterns are clues. They tell us what to expect next. They feel mathematical and safe and empowering. Even preschoolers know red always precedes orange, which always precedes yellow. Is there any more pleasing … Continue reading Sentence Diagramming: Jane Eyre Part 2

Sentence Diagramming: Jane Eyre Part 1

In these sporadic sentence diagramming posts, I diagram sentences to deepen their meaning or for my own amusement. During the Kavanaugh hearings, a quote by Jackson Katz about why the subjects and objects we choose matter floated around the Internet. Katz writes, “We talk about how many teenage girls … got pregnant last year, rather than … Continue reading Sentence Diagramming: Jane Eyre Part 1